After watching over this film opening. "Prae Weissman" 's name needs to stay on screen for as long as the shot goes. I feel that the extreme close up shot of the eye after the close up on the hair dresser taking the scissor out from her pocket does not allow the story line to flow and it does not make much sense. Moreover the music stops before it should.
Friday 30 January 2015
SNIP second draft
After watching over this film opening. "Prae Weissman" 's name needs to stay on screen for as long as the shot goes. I feel that the extreme close up shot of the eye after the close up on the hair dresser taking the scissor out from her pocket does not allow the story line to flow and it does not make much sense. Moreover the music stops before it should.
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