I worked on the "things that could be improved";
"hint of the killer/psycho"
I added a shot of the hair dresser pulling the scissor out in slow motion, so that it might suggest to the audience that the hairdresser has the ability to take their life away, she has got the weapon to do so in her hands and she using it next to the customer's necks. There are two scenes at the end where I feel that it suggests the morbidity and the composition of the shot is awkward, a disruption in the equilibrium and suggests death as the customer lied down, closing her eyes, she trusts the hairdresser and then a cut to the water whirling scene which is used in the movie "Psycho" and "Dexter" which suggests the mental instability of the main character and the psychological genre. Moreover this scene can suggest the uncertainty of the customer's life.
"Font too tmblr"
I do agree that the font used here is too fashionable and modern which does not go along well with the setting and the tone we are trying to set. Therefore I changed from "basic title" to something similar to a "courier" which is a typewriter style font, it gives a robust and neat but at the same time dirty, just like the salon.
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